I do not know about the writings or the experience of this person but I think you are being dishonest when your scripture that you are comparing are obviously a different translation. There are many good translations of the bible.
I am not saying hers are accurate or even a paraphrase. What I am upset about is your implying that no one has experienced hell and come back.
 
There is the bible answer man replacement, Hank Hanegraff [sp] whom I heard mocking Dr Eby's [sp] experience of heaven and hell. Big know it all's who think just because they have not experienced it that it is unbiblical. You can not even imagine how frustrating this is. Not only do unbelievers not believe you, but people who consider themselves Christian. I am a Christian now because I personally experienced hell. I have met people in the hospital who have also had that life changing experience.
 
Please do not be decieved yourself. There are many Christians today that God has allowed to experience either heaven or hell. I am not saying that this person is accurate but I am saying that yes many of us have experienced hell.
Dr Maurice Rawlings a ER cardiologist has documented many examples in his book and video To Hell and Back.
 
These same people think nothing of discrediting anything of the supernatural. They usualy also do not believe in the gifts of the spirit. I call these people the walking dead becuase the mock many of the special supernatural ways in which God communicates to us. Therefore they refuse to listen and make fun of anyone who does. I would say these people are looking for trouble and will be judged rightly.